A PERFECT LOVE STORY.
Everyone says that opposites attract, and sometimes
believe or not, that phrase has a lot of sense when that happen and you can see
and feel the chemistry and the attraction of 2 people, and sometimes is
impossible keep that in secret, and you can see how life is going to put this
people together in every situation of their life.
Sara was a girl that was very focused on her future,
she was very serious, but her personality didn’t mean that she was a person
without friends, she always had her group of friends, and they were very close
in a lot of situations. Also, a lot of boys wanted to be with Sara, because she
was a girl that had everything: she was very intelligent and interesting
person, but also she had a beauty that is not only physical, is more than her
body or her face, she has something special. She was not rude, and she always
used to help all the people she can, maybe that was the reason that make her so
special. Sara used to be part of a group in her school, this group realized a
lot of activities in her school, and sometimes Sara went to others towns being
part of this group.
Sara had the same ideal for man that all girls have:
she imagined a tall man, handsome, maybe a boy that played soccer or any sport,
respectful and kind, and a boy that always says the truth and loves her without
any problem. Thinking about this boy, Sara always was a girl that didn’t have a
lot of boyfriends, because she thought and knew that she was very special for
be with any boy. Finally, Sara met someone that was very similar to the
thoughts that she always had, and she decided to give him an opportunity. Tom
was a boy that played soccer, and was very serious but he found the way to love
Sara. Sara was very happy with Tom, but with the pass of the time, she was
feeling that something was missing in her relationship, and she didn’t know what
was wrong. Very worried about this, she talked with Tom and he said that for
him nothing is strange, and he felt very happy with her. After this conversation,
Sara knew that he wasn’t the problem, the problem was her, maybe she was bored
of a normal relationship, and she wanted something more, more emotion.
One day, she was with her school group, and they were planning
a trip to a farm in Copacabana for three days. Sara was very serious when she
went to that kind of trips, because she knew the most of the girls went to get
a new boyfriend, and she was always against that, she went with the mentality
of be focus on just the activities, in do a lot of friends but just for a
friendship. When they arrived to Copacabana, a lot of people were hugging and
kissing and saying hello to everyone, she saw a boy called Daniel that was with
a lot of people saying hi to, but he hug and kiss to everyone and that stressed
Sara, so she went to her room and organized all her things.
At night, all the people were in the pool, and Sara
was with a friend, they were talking and she saw again the boys that was in the
morning with all the people, and she saw that him was very interested in her,
so she moved to other place with her friend. They were talking and her friend
sat in way that she was “talking with his back”, so Daniel when saw that, he
screamed to Sara’s friend, but Sara was too angry and said to Daniel that was
just a joke, and Daniel very sadden, continued with his friends and Sara too.
Sara thought that was the last time that she saw Daniel.
Daniel was very interested in Sara, so Daniel tried to
be more close to Sara to know all about her, so he contacted her sister
Alejandra. They became real friends, and Daniel told her the feeling for her
sister Sara. Alejandra was very excited with this idea because she knew that
Daniel was the perfect boy for her sister, but also, she was worried because
Daniel thought that he was not enough for Sara, that she deserved more than he
can offer. In spite of that situation, Alejandra helped Daniel to talk with
Sara, at the beginning was very difficult because Daniel was ashamed.
Finally, Alejandra convinced Daniel, and he send a text to Sara. He was very nervous, but the happiness that he felt when he saw that his message was answered was incomparable. Sara for other side, thought that Daniel just want a friendship, so she answered very serious but kind.
After a long time, the conversations were more often
and interesting, and one day, Daniel said to Sara that was a good opportunity
to hang out together. Sara was very nervous because was the first time that
they were together. So they organized the day and the time. The day of the date
was very slow for Sara, and with the pass of the time she was more and more
nervous, so she send a message to Daniel because she wanted to know how he was.
At 8:00pm, Daniel was going to Sara’s house very nervous, he was very scared of
the reaction of Sara. When he arrived to her house, he felt very happy, and he
thought that it was the perfect night with her, they talked a lot of time, and
they had fun in their date, but Daniel wanted to stay more time with Sara, so
he asked her if she wanted to go to a restaurant the next weekend, and she said
yes. Sara was very happy after the date with Daniel, and Alejandra asked her
what she felt, and obviously she felt attracted with Daniel. On the week, Sara
and Daniel talked a little because they were too busy, but that didn’t matter,
Sara and Daniel were very happy talked all the day. The time was passing and
Sara felt that she wanted to be with Daniel, that he was the boy that she
always wanted, very different of her thoughts, but he knew how to make her happy.
But there was a problem, Sara was with Tom.
Sara was very confused because she was with Tom but
she wanted to be with Daniel, and she knew that both were in love with her, she
felt very terrible with this situation, because she never imagined that this could
happened to her. She didn’t know what to do, she loved Tom but she was not in
love with him, she was in love with Daniel. For Daniel that was not a problem,
he was so in love with Sara that he accepted that situation, but with the pass
of the time, he wanted to be more and more with her, and that was a problem
because she was with Tom. So one day, Daniel and Sara talked and he decided
take distance of Sara, and that was the best decision for both. Sara was very
sad and Daniel too, they didn’t talk for almost a month, and Sara was always
waiting for a message from Daniel. One day, Sara didn’t resist, and she send a
message, Daniel was very happy because he thought that Sara forget him. They
began to talk again and the attraction was the same, and both felt the same
chemistry when were together, but Daniel was very clear with Sara, he said to
her that is unfair with him and Tom that situation, so she had to choose being
with Tom or Daniel.
For Sara was very difficult, because she knew the pain
of Tom if they broke up, but she never wanted to feel again the sadness when
she was without Daniel. So she took a decision. That night, Sara talked with
Tom and broke up with him, she was very sad but very happy because that was de
beginning of her best relationship ever. She never felt so comfortable and
loved by someone, and Daniel gives all for her.
Sara toll him that she broke up with Tom, and he asked
her if she wanted time for think good the things, she said no, that she didn’t
need time, she wanted to stay with him in that moment. Daniel was very happy
with this decision, and she said to Sara that both were be very happy, that
nobody had the same attraction like them, that nobody had the same possibility
to find a person that is only for you, and he felt that Sara was perfect for
him.
Sara and Daniel were very happy together, Daniel
taught a lot of new things to Sara, new music and new cultures. Both were too
different, he was very relaxed and Sara was like a little girl, she was very
spoiled, but that was not a problem, Sara can’t live without Daniel, and Daniel
can’t live without Sara.
Maria Isabel Quintero
It was too good, i like it a lot. You use a lot of vocabulary and it makes that the reader follow the story.
ResponderEliminar¡it is very romantic!
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ResponderEliminarit seems that you love romantic stories and you know how to write very well.
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