WHAT IS AFTER OF AN ADVENTURE?
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our months ago a group of friends were planning
a trip, were they could find new and amazing things; Caroline, who was sixteen
years old, a little bit serious but very intelligent, was part of the group,
also Clarisse, who was the youngest of the group, she was so beautiful, tall, Blondie,
had a very nice body, besides, this was because she was an athlete; Michael was
seventeen years old, he was a guy so intelligent, very responsible, handsome,
and he was interested in Clarisse, but he wanted keep it on secret, and finally
was Andre, the biggest of the group, he was eighteen years old, he liked a lot
the sports and the nature, but he also liked the math’s, he was very tall, with
a lot of muscles and a beautiful face.
It was 18 of November, in Florida, a cold day
and the four were all together on Clarisse’s house talking about how special
could be a trip, so, Andrew said: “ Why don´t we go to the forest of Lalumbo?”,
and all showed their enthusiasm and accepted the proposal, so they began to
plan the trip and they should do. In November 20th, they went to
Lalumbo, when they arrived to the forest, all were so happy, and on their faces
you could see how their were surprised by the nature, then they began to set
their tents, they had some problems with that, but finally they could do it.
With the pass of the days, they needed to work
really hard, to have some food, but that was what they want, a real survival
test, where they could find themselves, one day of so much walking, they found
a house, with a lot of humidity, it looked like the walls were going to fall,
all of them where so scared. Clarisse, was hugging Michael, obviously he was
happy about that, but he also was so scared, Andrew got into the room first,
because he was the oldest, but…
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In the room was a dead body, he began to
scream, so the others ran to where he was, when all saw that terrifying thing,
they were all in shock, but in that moment the police arrived, and found them
there, so the detective began to made questions about what was happening,
because they were the main suspects.
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Why
are you here? Said the police.
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We
were just walking, and we found this house, and then we saw the dead body, but
we are not involve in this crime, said Caroline.
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Sorry,
you will have to come with me to the police station.
All began to scream, cry, and refused to move,
but Andrew said that was better if they go with the force, so all went to the patrolman
station.
After the copper explain all the process, they would
need make a decision, if they call their parents or just try to fix everything
on their account.
They really didn’t know what to do, Clarisse
was so nervous, but all were trying to help her to be relax, after a lot of conversations,
they decided that they would fix it alone…
They began an investigation with the police,
because none knew something about that crime, but as you know, someone is
always looking, you just need to find it, and there wasn’t an exception.
After so much searching of a response to this
crime, a very old women appeared, and mysteriously she knew how and who did
that, his name was Arthur, all the Friends were so excited because they could
be free, even Caroline that was so serious, she was so happy, screaming and
jumping with the others.
And now the hard work would began, they needed
to find that man, but with the specific things that the old women gave them,
that work would be easier.
He was in a forest named Taruta, it was so beautiful,i has a big waterfall and a lot of nature. Finally they found a cave, very confuse
and strange, but there was Arthur, long hair, he didn’t look good; all of them
ran and began to speak, at the beginning he was so serious, but then he
understood that he really needed to tell the true because they were not guilty
and they were so young, he knew that he was doing everything wrong, but he needed
to understand the position of this people, So they went to the police station,
and told the real story.
Arthur, obviously paid for the things he did,
the four went to their house, Clarisse and Michael were always together, and
that was so strange, so when they arrived to Florida they kissed each other,
all were so surprised about that, but hey looked so beautiful together.
And that was how a trip of one week became of
two weeks, obviously they had to tell their parents lies, saying that the place
was so beautiful and they could not leave, so they met again with their
parents, they began to ask how was the trip, and they just looked at each other
and fell silent, with a small and naughty smile.
Mariana Gómez
I love the story and how it develope. The reader can foolow the story and is easy to understand, good job
ResponderEliminarit's a very good storie. you describe very well each character.
ResponderEliminar